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以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。
pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/faq.xml: 1.5 -> 1.6
> revision 1.6
> date: 2005/05/07 15:28:40; author: rillig; state: Exp; lines: +15 -37
> Restructured the description of the first two sections of the package
> Makefile. Fixed some other typos. Removed the MESSAGE file of audit-
> package and described how to display it. Approved by wiz.
水曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。
以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。
--- faq.xml.orig 2006-09-12 00:31:03.000000000 +0900
+++ faq.xml 2006-09-12 00:31:03.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.5 2005/02/24 14:24:32 jschauma Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2005/05/07 15:28:40 rillig Exp $ -->
<!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.5 2005/02/24 14:24:32 jschauma Exp -->
+<!-- NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2005/05/07 15:28:40 rillig Exp -->
<chapter id="faq"> <?dbhtml filename="faq.html"?>
<title>よくある質問</title>
@@ -372,7 +372,8 @@
<para> <pkg>pkgtools/pkg_install</pkg>パッケージのコンパイル時に、makeが
<filename>/usr/share/tmac/tmac.andoc</filename> の作り方がわからないというエラーを出します。これ
- は、そのマシンに<quote>text</quote>セット(nroffなど)がインストールされていないことを意味
+ は、そのマシンに NetBSD の基本配布物の<quote>text</quote>セット
+ (nroffなど)がインストールされていないことを意味
しています。マニュアルページの整形ができるようにするため、<quote>text</quote>セットをインストールしてください。 </para>
<para> この<pkg>pkgtools/pkg_install</pkg>パッケージの事例は、
@@ -409,8 +410,8 @@
インストールしてから、<filename>/etc/mk.conf</filename>に以下の内容を書いておきます。 </para>
<programlisting>
- .if exists(/usr/pkg/bin/sudo)
- SU_CMD=/usr/pkg/bin/sudo /bin/sh -c
+ .if exists(${LOCALBASE}/bin/sudo)
+ SU_CMD=${LOCALBASE}/bin/sudo /bin/sh -c
.endif
</programlisting>
</sect1>
@@ -545,35 +546,13 @@
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para> audit-packagesパッケージを使うよう強くおすすめします。
+ <para> <pkg>security/audit-packages</pkg>
+ パッケージを使うよう強くおすすめします。
+ <quote>audit-packages</quote> をインストールした後に、
+ パッケージのメッセージを読んでください。このメッセージは
+ <userinput>pkg_info -D audit-package</userinput> を実行すれば表示できます。
</para>
- <para> audit-packagesのインストール中に以下のようなメッセージが表示されます。 </para>
-
- <screen>
-===========================================================================
-$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.5 2005/02/24 14:24:32 jschauma Exp $
-
-You may wish to have the vulnerabilities file downloaded daily so that
-it remains current. This may be done by adding an appropriate entry
-to the root users crontab(5) entry. For example the entry
-
-# download vulnerabilities file
-0 3 * * * ${PREFIX}/sbin/download-vulnerability-list >/dev/null 2>&1
-
-will update the vulnerability list every day at 3AM. You may wish to do
-this more often than once a day.
-
-In addition, you may wish to run the package audit from the daily
-security script. This may be accomplished by adding the following
-lines to /etc/security.local
-
-if [ -x ${PREFIX}/sbin/audit-packages ]; then
- ${PREFIX}/sbin/audit-packages
-fi
-
-===========================================================================
- </screen>
</sect1>
</chapter>
Index: faq.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- faq.xml 24 Feb 2005 14:24:32 -0000 1.5
+++ faq.xml 7 May 2005 15:28:40 -0000 1.6
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.5 2005/02/24 14:24:32 jschauma Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.6 2005/05/07 15:28:40 rillig Exp $ -->
<chapter id="faq"> <?dbhtml filename="faq.html"?>
<title>Frequently Asked Questions</title>
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
<para> The answer here is to do a <command>make
fetch-list</command> in <filename>/usr/pkgsrc</filename> or one
of it's subdirectories, carry the resulting list to your machine
- at work/school and use it there If you don't have a
+ at work/school and use it there. If you don't have a
NetBSD-compatible ftp(1) (like lukemftp) at work, don't forget
to set <varname>FETCH_CMD</varname> to something that fetches a
URL: </para>
@@ -388,8 +388,9 @@
<para> When compiling the <pkg>pkgtools/pkg_install</pkg> package,
you get the error from make that it doesn't know how to make
<filename>/usr/share/tmac/tmac.andoc</filename>? This indicates
- that you don't have installed the <quote>text</quote> set on
- your machine (nroff, ...). It is recommended to do that to
+ that you don't have installed the <quote>text</quote> set
+ (nroff, ...) from the NetBSD base distribution on
+ your machine. It is recommended to do that to
format manpages. </para>
<para> In the case of the <pkg>pkgtools/pkg_install</pkg> package,
@@ -430,8 +431,8 @@
<filename>/etc/mk.conf</filename>: </para>
<programlisting>
- .if exists(/usr/pkg/bin/sudo)
- SU_CMD=/usr/pkg/bin/sudo /bin/sh -c
+ .if exists(${LOCALBASE}/bin/sudo)
+ SU_CMD=${LOCALBASE}/bin/sudo /bin/sh -c
.endif
</programlisting>
</sect1>
@@ -573,44 +574,21 @@
<listitem>
<para> <quote>audit-packages</quote>, an easy way to audit the
- current machine, checking each vulnerability which is
- known. If a vulnerable package is installed, it will
- be shown by output to stdout, including a description
+ current machine, checking each vulnerability which is
+ known. If a vulnerable package is installed, it will
+ be shown by output to stdout, including a description
of the type of vulnerability, and a URL containing more
information. </para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- <para> Use of the audit-packages package is strongly recommended!
+ <para> Use of the <pkg>security/audit-packages</pkg> package is
+ strongly recommended!
+ After <quote>audit-packages</quote> is installed, please read
+ the package's message, which you can get by running
+ <userinput>pkg_info -D audit-package</userinput>.
</para>
- <para> The following message is displayed as part of the
- audit-packages installation procedure: </para>
-
- <screen>
-===========================================================================
-$NetBSD: faq.xml,v 1.5 2005/02/24 14:24:32 jschauma Exp $
-
-You may wish to have the vulnerabilities file downloaded daily so that
-it remains current. This may be done by adding an appropriate entry
-to the root users crontab(5) entry. For example the entry
-
-# download vulnerabilities file
-0 3 * * * ${PREFIX}/sbin/download-vulnerability-list >/dev/null 2>&1
-
-will update the vulnerability list every day at 3AM. You may wish to do
-this more often than once a day.
-
-In addition, you may wish to run the package audit from the daily
-security script. This may be accomplished by adding the following
-lines to /etc/security.local
-
-if [ -x ${PREFIX}/sbin/audit-packages ]; then
- ${PREFIX}/sbin/audit-packages
-fi
-
-===========================================================================
- </screen>
</sect1>
</chapter>