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about/history.xml: 1.8 -> 1.9
以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。
about/history.xml: 1.8 -> 1.9
> revision 1.9
> date: 2010/12/10 14:45:13; author: pooka; state: Exp; lines: +6 -7
> Lites was based on 4.4BSD Lite, not NetBSD (it could run NetBSD
> binaries, though), so remove it from here. Reword a bit too.
日曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。
以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。
--- about/history.xml.orig 2010-12-11 00:03:23.000000000 +0900
+++ about/history.xml 2010-12-11 00:03:23.000000000 +0900
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
<webpage id="ja-about-history">
<config param="desc" value="NetBSD プロジェクトの歴史"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.8 2010/02/12 04:58:11 snj Exp $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.9 2010/12/10 14:45:13 pooka Exp $"/>
<!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.8 2010/02/12 04:58:11 snj Exp -->
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2010/02/12 04:58:11 $"/>
+<!-- NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.9 2010/12/10 14:45:13 pooka Exp -->
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2010/12/10 14:45:13 $"/>
<head>
<title>NetBSD プロジェクトの歴史</title>
</head>
@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@
</para>
<para>
-以来、プロジェクトの多くの開発者に加えて、
+以来、NetBSD では、プロジェクトの多くの開発に加えて、
<emphasis role="bold">4.4BSD Lite</emphasis>を含めた多くの他のソースからの変更をインポートしています。
-またNetBSDは、ユタ大学の <emphasis role="bold">Lites</emphasis>(Machの上層) や、
+またNetBSDは、
Appleの<emphasis role="bold">Rhapsody</emphasis> を含めた他の派生物の基礎としても使用されています。
</para>
Index: about/history.xml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/about/history.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- about/history.xml 12 Feb 2010 04:58:11 -0000 1.8
+++ about/history.xml 10 Dec 2010 14:45:13 -0000 1.9
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
<webpage id="about-history">
<config param="desc" value="The History of the NetBSD Project"/>
-<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.8 2010/02/12 04:58:11 snj Exp $"/>
-<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2010/02/12 04:58:11 $"/>
+<config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: history.xml,v 1.9 2010/12/10 14:45:13 pooka Exp $"/>
+<config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2010/12/10 14:45:13 $"/>
<head>
<title>The History of the NetBSD Project</title>
</head>
@@ -28,11 +28,10 @@
</para>
<para>
-Since then, in addition to the many developers within the project, it has
-imported changes from many other sources, including <emphasis
-role="bold">4.4BSD Lite</emphasis>. NetBSD has also been used as the basis of
-other derivatives, including the University of Utah's <emphasis
-role="bold">Lites</emphasis> (on top of Mach), and Apple's <emphasis
+Since then, in addition to the many developments within the project,
+NetBSD has imported changes from many other sources, including
+<emphasis role="bold">4.4BSD Lite</emphasis>. NetBSD has also been
+used as the basis of other derivatives, including Apple's <emphasis
role="bold">Rhapsody</emphasis>.
</para>