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docs/network/ipsec/index.xml: 1.4 -> 1.5
以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。
docs/network/ipsec/index.xml: 1.4 -> 1.5
> revision 1.5
> date: 2009/01/15 09:50:23; author: hubertf; state: Exp; lines: +12 -4
> Put processing diagrams into own subsection, and split them imto
> two separate diagrams.
>
> XXX someone know if the contents are still OK?
金曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。
以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。
--- docs/network/ipsec/index.xml.orig 2009-01-15 21:55:52.000000000 +0900
+++ docs/network/ipsec/index.xml 2009-01-15 21:55:52.000000000 +0900
@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
<webpage id="ja-docs-network-ipsec-index">
<config param="desc" value="NetBSD IPsec FAQ"/>
- <config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.4 2008/02/15 00:52:19 hubertf Exp $"/>
+ <config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.5 2009/01/15 09:50:23 hubertf Exp $"/>
<!-- Based on english version: -->
- <!-- NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.4 2008/02/15 00:52:19 hubertf Exp -->
- <config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2008/02/15 00:52:19 $"/>
+ <!-- NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.5 2009/01/15 09:50:23 hubertf Exp -->
+ <config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2009/01/15 09:50:23 $"/>
<head>
<!-- Copyright (c) 1994-2006
@@ -627,8 +627,12 @@
使って見分けるようにする必要があるかもしれません。
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
+ </sect3>
+
+ <sect3 id="procorder">
+ <title>処理順序</title>
- <para>下記の図は、新しい処理順序をまとめたものです。</para>
+ <para>下記の図は、受信側の新しい処理順序をまとめたものです。</para>
<programlisting>
入ってくる場合の処理:
@@ -644,12 +648,16 @@
v ^ ^ |
tunnel | +----------------------+ decapsulated IPsec packets
devices |
- | ipfilter rules
+ | ipfilter rule
| ^
+------>|
|
Network drivers (ethernet)
+</programlisting>
+
+ <para>下記の図は、送信側の新しい処理順序をまとめたものです。</para>
+ <programlisting>
出てゆく場合の処理:
userland programs IKE daemon
| AF_INET{,6} socket ^ | PF_KEY socket
Index: docs/network/ipsec/index.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/htdocs/docs/network/ipsec/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- docs/network/ipsec/index.xml 15 Feb 2008 00:52:19 -0000 1.4
+++ docs/network/ipsec/index.xml 15 Jan 2009 09:50:23 -0000 1.5
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
<webpage id="docs-network-ipsec-index">
<config param="desc" value="NetBSD IPsec FAQ"/>
- <config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.4 2008/02/15 00:52:19 hubertf Exp $"/>
- <config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2008/02/15 00:52:19 $"/>
+ <config param="cvstag" value="$NetBSD: index.xml,v 1.5 2009/01/15 09:50:23 hubertf Exp $"/>
+ <config param="rcsdate" value="$Date: 2009/01/15 09:50:23 $"/>
<head>
<!-- Copyright (c) 1994-2006
@@ -644,8 +644,12 @@
in &man.ipf.conf.5;.
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
+ </sect3>
+
+ <sect3 id="procorder">
+ <title>Processing order</title>
- <para>The following diagram summarizes new processing order.</para>
+ <para>The following diagram summarizes new inbound processing order:</para>
<programlisting>
inbound processing:
@@ -661,12 +665,16 @@
v ^ ^ |
tunnel | +----------------------+ decapsulated IPsec packets
devices |
- | ipfilter rules
+ | ipfilter rule
| ^
+------>|
|
Network drivers (ethernet)
+</programlisting>
+
+ <para>The following diagram summarizes new outbound processing order:</para>
+ <programlisting>
outbound processing:
userland programs IKE daemon
| AF_INET{,6} socket ^ | PF_KEY socket